All Comments on 'Getting Kinky with Sarah Pt. 03'

by Anoneemuss

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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

You could use an editor.

Lots and lots of annoying grammar mistakes. And this belongs in BDSM. Especially when she decides she's going to ass fuck him without any previous conversations. Your description of that action was laughable. If she did what you wrote, she would have torn his sphincter muscle badly. It takes time and lots of lube to work a newbie up to what they did. I wonder how many stitches it took the ER Doctor to sew him up? Ugly, uncomfortable tale of abuse.

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Fun switching BDSM series

Hope to see more ;-)

WhiteStockings about 5 years ago

Try again

It's not sufficient to list a sequence of kinky things done to each other.

It sounded like an check list. While writing you ticked one box after the other. Done. Done.

Atmosphere, feelings, surroundings?

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Jealous

Ignore the nay-sayers - I thought this was fun to read and very hot. Keep at it!

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