All Comments on 'Getting Naked For New Buds Pt. 03'

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leo_thedirewolfleo_thedirewolfover 2 years ago

Holy shit

i mean, you said you were working hard on this one but damn this seems like straight out of a published novel. r* experience hopefully doesn't come from some real experience, but if it does, i'm really sorry. i've read and enjoyed stories with similar scenarios, and I'm really glad you didn't go that route since it would be way out of touch with the realism of this story, which you also nailed it with moh's feelings after the sex. it's kind of worrying and hopefully he gets to feel better about himself, and explore more with danny, and even more hopefully, with the other boys. i'm not gonna lie, i was enjoying eric, josh and moh interactions a little too much, more than with danny, so I was sad to see them go D:

Themike21Themike21over 2 years ago

One of the best series I follow. Please, keep it up 😏

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story really appealed to me. I found the characters realistic and very hot!

romantisromantisover 2 years agoAuthor

Sedgee, thank you so much for the kind words! Regarding Eric and Josh, I initially had a lot more of them in this chapter, but it was very difficult to manage that many characters at once (much like a real-life orgy, I suppose, lol). So, for that reason I wound up chopping things up a bit. Much of what I initially wrote involving Eric and Josh will show up in future chapters. That said, (most of) the story will have a tighter focus on the Moh/Danny relationship than the others, but Eric and Josh are definitely still major players.

Regarding Moh’s r* experience. That definitely will be a thing that is explored more. I don’t want to say too much, but I will say I have no intention of being overly cruel to any characters (or the reader).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am really liking the relation development with Danny as well as the character building of Moh. Great job 👏

RobJasperRobJasperover 2 years ago

Hot story! Love the evolving relationship while the sex sizzles! Keep writing!

DustyDevilDustyDevilabout 2 years ago

Excellent story all around keep up the good work and hope to see more of your work in the near future.

romantisromantisalmost 2 years agoAuthor

I've been having some trouble with the next instalment. I still do plan on doing it, but it may take a while longer. In the meantime I may publish another (very short) story or two. Sometimes I find getting some idea out will help me not use them in other stories. In some ways I think the delay to this story was caused by me stuffing a little too much in.

StrattonChambersStrattonChambersalmost 2 years ago

Most excellent story. I love how there’s no real dom/sub feelings, just strong assertive boys taking care of each other.

canmccanmcalmost 2 years ago

Absolutely love this series, definitely one of my all-time favourites! I’d give it 10-stars if I could.

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