All Comments on 'Getting There Ch. 02'

At the rate you're going we'll get there about the same time hell freezes over.

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Luvved the moment u created between them gemma and ryan remind me of me nd my boyf haha. Pls make ur chaptrs a little longer nd frequent lol

Great story, but seriously, it's getting to be time to move along the plot development. (Yeah, yeah, I know; "bitch and moan, bitch and moan".)

I like slow, it helps build the anticipation. Although yeah, I'd like longer chapters, this one was good.

love the pace of the story - I like that we are getting to know the characters' backgrounds and witnessing the development of their friendship into something more. looking forward to the next chapter!

The pacing is necessary to develop character development, and I love the way your characters are going, although I wouldn't object to longer chapters this story is heading in the right direction and I can't wait to see what happens next. You've got a big fan in me :)