All Comments on 'Getting to Know Gal Gadot'

superb

but this would have been better to have more of a spice to it

in the length of about 5-6 pages

pure lost in the moment sex would be top notch

this is just my opinion

you have the skills to take this a notch up

I completely agree with you. I've only recently begun to write short stories. I am still trying to figure out how to write. To write 5-6 pages, I still need a lot of experience. I will write longer stories in future. Thank you for your feedback.

Need more

Loved it, you should come back to a celebrity story like this with more pages once you feel you have gained some experience, Or if you like to do them short (1-2 pages) just continue them with a Part 2 like you can see around the website when reading.

This was so well written as a first-person account. It sounded like it really happened....well done!

I like it. Hope you do a next chapter.

Great story. Need more

Best celebrity story so far, in my opinion.