All Comments on 'GF Asks to Costar in Her Fan Site'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Continue the story please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More, please!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is a very HOT twist on the cam girls theme. Love the way you presented it. I would love for you to add a second chapter, but add in some fetishes for the crowd, like smoking little whore cigars and doing piles of coke. Seems she can afford the indulgence, and it would allow you to open up the action to a bevy of party-girl whore wanna-be's. 5 stars!

LapinatorLapinatorover 2 years ago

Good story, but the main character mainly seems to communicate by nodding. Maybe a bit more dialogue so it doesn't seem like Brit is talking to herself all the time?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Needs to be continued.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Definitely want to see a chapter 2.

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