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All Comments on 'Ghost In The Mansion'

by JaxRhapsody

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SyleusSnowSyleusSnow6 months ago

That was quite a ride. Great concept with lots of well thought out detail. A little heavy on the dialogue for my taste but that quickens the pace. Five stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Oh damn, dude, this was cute at hell. Go write romance novels, I wanna buy them, they'd certainly be more interesting than what I see in that genre now.

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Jax Lazzo Rhapsody, just trying to get my stories known. This is essentially an experiment in my craft of writing. I will be trying different things here and there. I concluded this was on of the best sites, although pretty archaic, is simple to use. I'm trying to expand, lea...