All Comments on 'GianCarlo Ch. 08'

Please don't let that be his father

Oh shit. Caught.

So good!

Finally Delia and Gian did the do and it was good!! Who is disturbing their love nest? Now that they have mated Delia should be safer because to kill her is kill him now. Still don't like his sperm donor!! Amazing as always!!

Ohhhhh my God Yessssss!!!!finally feel like I've been waiting 60 years Lol, but was worth the wait.

Please don't let us wait forever for the next chapter for the love of God please

And I think that's his father

You and then 2 year cliff hangers are killing me please update soon I have to know who came busting in I hope it's not his parents.

Yes they finally did the nasty and now they are acting like rabbits! Good for them!

Who the Heck is intruding on their "Sexy time?" I bet it's his parents!

Damn Cock blockers!

You are kidding right? Months on end we wait and you leave it on a cliff hanger EVERY time, WHY?! 1*

But this was an overall good chapter. It's cute that both of the twins have a man. But I bet the the man that called Gian is his father. Yass hurry and write more I've been waiting on it.

So if she dies, so does Gian? Wonder what his father will do then? His weak ass mother and bully of a father, I hope they get put in their places eventually. Dee and Gian should get pregnant and decide to only have her family involved with their lives. Totally cut Gian's parents out.

To me this is the best story on lit; definitely the best two leading characters. Please please finish it!

I love your story 5*

I'm grateful that you have written so many chapters and have taken me a a roller coaster of emotions.

Plz post your new chapter : unfortunately I'm one of those ocd ppl that can't sleep until they have finished read something, so I read everything today :(

I look forward to reading more

Finish the story asshole!

Where's the rest?!

I saw u just updated Murphy and you haven't updated this story don't be an ass and finish this it's your BEST work def better than Murphy

Finish the next chapter I can't keep getting my hopes up about GianCarlo and Delia, I don't want to lose interest. Thanks