All Comments on 'Gifting Night'

Well written with anticipation of the next thought throughout the story. Left me wanting additional chapters. Thank you!

Extremely well written and aptly drawn. Good luck in the contest!

Interesting story! I like the death/acceptance theme... good luck to you!

I'm such a fan of your work now. This is a beautiful interpretation of the life of the undead. Good luck to you in the contest.

Powerful stuff, Lynx! I like how you've rewritten the age-old vampire mythos and brought a fresh perspective to it (at last). Good luck to you in the contest.

It's dark, erotic and completely enthralling. The words flowed like a great wine ready to be enjoyed and savoured.

Simply magnificient!

Excellent vampire tale, Lynx. I like the death acceptance spin, very original. Good luck in the contest.

Well written. Good luck with the contest.

Fusionnée

(Abs and Vana)

twist to the old vampire myth. I loved it.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

I like what you've done to add your own stamp to the mythos. You've created a fresh and enjoyable tale with more than a little heat. Well done.

I enjoyed reading it...

been mentioned in the New Story Review Thread as my blast of the past favorite.

This is a very unusual and original tale. Everything well executed, from the fighting to the three way sexual feeding. I look forward to reading the rest.

That was AMAZING. You're a very talented author and this story is so insanely hot.

It was interesting. Definitely different. I don't know if I like it. I found that I tend to like stories where the guy is only with one girl or the girl is with multiple guys. I enjoyed your story and it was an interesting plot. Good job

Great use of vocabulary. Perhaps a little over dramatic at times