All Comments on 'Gifting Night'

Great use of vocabulary. Perhaps a little over dramatic at times

It was interesting. Definitely different. I don't know if I like it. I found that I tend to like stories where the guy is only with one girl or the girl is with multiple guys. I enjoyed your story and it was an interesting plot. Good job

That was AMAZING. You're a very talented author and this story is so insanely hot.

This is a very unusual and original tale. Everything well executed, from the fighting to the three way sexual feeding. I look forward to reading the rest.

been mentioned in the New Story Review Thread as my blast of the past favorite.

I enjoyed reading it...

I like what you've done to add your own stamp to the mythos. You've created a fresh and enjoyable tale with more than a little heat. Well done.

twist to the old vampire myth. I loved it.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Well written. Good luck with the contest.

Fusionnée

(Abs and Vana)

Excellent vampire tale, Lynx. I like the death acceptance spin, very original. Good luck in the contest.

It's dark, erotic and completely enthralling. The words flowed like a great wine ready to be enjoyed and savoured.

Simply magnificient!

Powerful stuff, Lynx! I like how you've rewritten the age-old vampire mythos and brought a fresh perspective to it (at last). Good luck to you in the contest.

I'm such a fan of your work now. This is a beautiful interpretation of the life of the undead. Good luck to you in the contest.

Interesting story! I like the death/acceptance theme... good luck to you!

Extremely well written and aptly drawn. Good luck in the contest!

Well written with anticipation of the next thought throughout the story. Left me wanting additional chapters. Thank you!