All Comments on 'Ginny is a Sinner'

by AngelBell

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOW

OMIGOSH what an awesome erotic story......wish i had a step dad like that

4SRobinson4SRobinsonover 11 years ago
Anxious for part 2

Wonderful story, love the setting.....can't wait for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
all i know for sure

is that is an awesome title

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What a story !

You have real talent, AngelBell - nice touch !

A Mainer

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
AWESOME

Wow a great story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for part 2

TexasCanuck00TexasCanuck00over 11 years ago
Great Story!

Great job Angel! Can't wait to read part two….

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

can't wait for part two!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Another cheerleader?

So many stories with cheerleaders conveniently aged 18; getting boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Not a bad story so far, though I rather wish the step-father had gone all the way with Ginny. Perhaps that will happen in a future chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Loved this story. You should concider posting it in voyeur as well. Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Emblematic of the competence we should demand

Intelligent, literate story by a writer with talent. Please contribute again.

sammyIammysammyIammyover 11 years ago
Wow!!

SO glad she stopped at his room. When do we get part II? Dying to watch this one play out. You're very good!

MRThickCAMRThickCAover 11 years ago
Wow

This was an amazing story. I have such a fetish for voyeur, and the twist of quasi-incest was the icing on the cake! I came buckets. :O

On to some actual feedback - I thought the story was extremely well written. Your word use is phenomenal. Are you using a XXX Thesaurus? ;)

Thanks for the submission, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

The_VolunteerThe_Volunteerover 11 years ago
those were the days

I was a college athlete and I have very fond memories of tightbodied cheerleaders and female swimmers and gymnasts. You do write well.

ukniceguyukniceguyabout 11 years ago

Wonderful story Angel, they get better and better. Fired my imagination no end, I love the idea of being a voyeur, and this has left me very hard and in need of sorting myself out! Thank you, can't wait to find out what happens next :)

kaidmankaidmanabout 11 years ago
dynamite

nice work can't wait to read the next chapter if I was Jake I would confront his father and blacmail him to give him more privaledges and even a car as well as scaring him so to keep the sister ti himself

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Totally hot!. This story was sexy as hell. I felt like I was in the room too! I loved the story and have given it 5 stars. You couldn't have made the vision of this barely-legal cheerleading senior high school girl any hotter.

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