by AngelBell
Totally hot!. This story was sexy as hell. I felt like I was in the room too! I loved the story and have given it 5 stars. You couldn't have made the vision of this barely-legal cheerleading senior high school girl any hotter.
nice work can't wait to read the next chapter if I was Jake I would confront his father and blacmail him to give him more privaledges and even a car as well as scaring him so to keep the sister ti himself
Wonderful story Angel, they get better and better. Fired my imagination no end, I love the idea of being a voyeur, and this has left me very hard and in need of sorting myself out! Thank you, can't wait to find out what happens next :)
I was a college athlete and I have very fond memories of tightbodied cheerleaders and female swimmers and gymnasts. You do write well.
This was an amazing story. I have such a fetish for voyeur, and the twist of quasi-incest was the icing on the cake! I came buckets. :O
On to some actual feedback - I thought the story was extremely well written. Your word use is phenomenal. Are you using a XXX Thesaurus? ;)
Thanks for the submission, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
SO glad she stopped at his room. When do we get part II? Dying to watch this one play out. You're very good!
Intelligent, literate story by a writer with talent. Please contribute again.
Loved this story. You should concider posting it in voyeur as well. Great work.
Not a bad story so far, though I rather wish the step-father had gone all the way with Ginny. Perhaps that will happen in a future chapter.
So many stories with cheerleaders conveniently aged 18; getting boring.
Wonderful story, love the setting.....can't wait for part 2
OMIGOSH what an awesome erotic story......wish i had a step dad like that