All Comments on 'Girl Badly Humiliated on First Time Pt. 02'

I like the direction of the story, will love to read future chapters.

Great start with these two stories. Can’t wait to see her taken to the next level! Keep up the good work.

Would be nice maybe to involve the parents ?

I don’t want to be a dick about a great fantasy story but Dads home. What dad in the world would allow public humiliation of his daughter by this little ‘playing tough guy’ they call a Dom or maybe master. ‘I kinda like master, say Eric, might I be worthy of the master title? With the name master?’Nervously Eric said ,’Sure’. ‘So If your master you won’t need me... so I’m going to go, ok? While he’s talking he moving toward the door thinking he’s gonna get out. He didn’t. ‘No no no Eric, were not rude! We have a Role right here in the pink dress, for you, you’ll be playing the lovely role of slut today!’ I ask ‘How’s that work for you son?’ “I’m sorry I’m going to say the safe word and bow out.’ As Eric turns to leave.. I run up and catch him by the shoulders, whip him back around to face me. No remorse.. I bust him dead in the face hard. Crushed his nose. Bleeding every where... he’s making some pathetic noise. I told him I’m new to this but when my daughter was hurting you sternly corrected that right? I punched him dead in the face 3 more times. Tons more blood now. No noise. Eric remaining silent on pain and fear.

Where is the tape from yesterday that I heard mentioned..... Eric sits silent... no? No tape Eric? I ask to be handed my needle nose pliers. Once handed to me I turn on poor slut Eric like some medieval dick. I crush his nipple through his shirt as blood soakes his shirt. “The tape Eric, now” Eric slightly hesitates... I yell for my welding torches. The look at Eric. Our slut is a crying, shit his pants wet mess. But quickly he points to his bag. I search the bag and find the tape. Eric pleases that he’s sorry! I tell him “You’re not sorry mate, not by a long shot. But you will be. We’re going to film that exact date again, both days. Only changes, I’ll be the role master and you will be the obedient slut.” 👹👹

I really hope you write a few more chapters it's a great read I loved the ending

spelling proof read

I foolishly thought I’ll give it a second chance, after all everyone deserves a 2nd chance, right? OMG what a humongous pile of shit, my mistake. That said I am glad because I a had a good laugh at MarriedFunWife’s comment.

Oh dear where should I start, is it even worth trying to point out the flaws in this “plot”

The snot nosed brat who’s demanding to be called “Master” just no, (that’s actually where I gave up reading) this isn’t BDSM it’s nowhere near Safe, Sane or Consensual. He’s a rapist, an abusive little turd who should be arrested and be shown the error of his ways. Add to that what MarriedFunWife said and I’m done.

Tess (UK)

Tess If you don't like noncon stories why are you reading this in the first place? I know this isnt for everyone and if it's not for you then DON'T READ IT lol

Besides it's super easy to send abuse to someone from an anonymous account. Why not write a story yourself and see how that goes?

Dave x

Oh slut, don't worry no one will want a whore like you. Besides I've done you a favor, your pussy will never be as tight as it was when you woke up this morning again and now any guy that fucks you can go straight balls deep and not have to put up with your pathetic whining after every inch. So..."

wow that was domething cruel to say to anyone ,no one deserves to be lonely everyone deserves love ,she deserves love and a husband even though he claims her to be a slut despite the fact thst he was the one to rape her and steal her virginity

these are the lines that the sex trafficking victims might here from their smugglers,trafficers and pimps

wonder what is their mistakes and this girls mistake to deserve this

no no i am not criticising you this happens in the real world and has been happening sinve older times the spoils of war ,poor snd abandoned kids amd women and mere talking about morals aint gonna solve it hell its never gonna be solved

thankyou for writing it young girls above 18 must read about these

they should know why they should talk about the abuse to their parents instead of keeping quite unlike this poor girl when the abuse happened for the very first time

i am surprised how the parents and brothers ignored all this and let this happen to her or how a girl as old as she cant distinguish btw a good guy and an abusive guy why is she letting this go on instead of getting the police involved he has left all the evidences and is clearly not afraid to hide his identity

its all fault of taylor swift to misguide the young girls to put themselves in vulnerable situations with the bad gud looking strangers instead of a less gud looking nice guy

hasnt anyone taught her not to trust strangers and sometimes all men

her parents might be religious but they failed her in the real world they didnt teach her to suspect strangers and moreover let him harass her in front of everyone seems like there is a lot of communication gap btw her and her parents but whats more surprising is that she has almost no friend to talk about it

once again thankyou for sharing this this is what every guy really wants the best guide for girl to understand the male pov about the one sided thrill ,pride, fun they get from rape ,abuse,helplessness and abuse of women

well no man wants this to happen to their mothers and sisters or gfs but i am sure all men are ready to the exact same things to any other girl available in the vicinity be it his friend,his classmate,his teacher or any woman not related to him to pick on her weaknpoints as humiliation and prey upon her with no regards for her as a fellow human being

really gud one keep writing dave wanna read more stories like this its difficult to read it w/o getting shocked or angry but at the end it has all the red flags for young girls to not to ignore which makes it reading worthit

please write more dave

Awesome!!!

When is he gonna fuck her ass