by Ana_Lingus
the guy left behind is too stupid. There is really no need for additional "chapters" without some drastic change in that guy's behavior.
Dragging this out is ridiculous. Either do your business and get it over with, or get off the pot. My scores on this series have gone from 3*s to 2*s to now 1*.
And don't get me wrong -- I usually LIKE these kinds of stories!
Worse than the story not going anywhere after 3 chapters is the fact you’ve totally ignored any and all reader suggestions to make it better. This is officially a turd.
Hi, your style of writing is very good, I really like this series.
Please I want you to continue to make Chapters 4, 5, 6 etc.
Please create more, i really like this story.
You will continue to get 1 ratings until you create a character who I can be interested in.
You need some storytelling 101!
Plus you're a cunt.