All Comments on 'Girl in the Painting Library Exhibi'

Good to see you're back. And good to see Beth more and more daring. Keep it coming!

You write really well, much better than most of the authors on the site. The story is interesting, well told and very erotic. Keep going with your writing, you can be really good.

I look forward to your next piece of work.

Well done.

Excuse me if I’m being presumptuous and the writer actually is Asian… but in what world would an Asian person ever refer to their own features as ‘exotic’?

Loved the story and appreciate the quality of your writing. One small nit to pick: Fairly near the end "Rosalie turned to Aaron" should be "Rosalie turned to Matt".

Please do a part 3

Higher education, I didn't know it could be like this

Beth is a wonderful character and I hope she can bring Matt and Rosalie to Aaron’s studio in the near future!

Great writing.