All Comments on 'Girl In The Park'

by SimonDoom

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Djmac1031Djmac10313 months ago

Ya know, it's funny, because my first version of the Mystery Woman Challenge had a very similar theme, but I wound up scrapping it for something very different.

Im glad I did because your version is much better.

AnnalovesitAnnalovesit3 months ago

I just wish I had your way with words, lovely story imagining what may happen ?

Anna

zooliciouszoolicious3 months ago

A short intro to a promising heartfelt adventure.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Delightful fantasy!

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EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months ago

Loved: “ hair ebony and thick and flowing past her shoulders in intemperate waves” very lyrical 😊 Em

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I am a long-time reader of stories on this Site, and I began publishing stories in late 2016. I enjoy a variety of erotic stories, and I hope to publish stories that explore many different aspects of erotica. Comments and constructive criticism are welcome.