All Comments on 'Girl Next Door - Layla Ch. 03'

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MigbirdMigbirdover 2 years ago

That Layla and Diana enjoy each other’s company is wild understatement. Liked the way you juxtaposed the “movie” with the real action — plays to your desire to write your own stories. Still intrigued while enjoying the intensity and passion.

S9808S9808about 1 year ago

pretty hot, but lacked a little imagination or adventure. good story but failed to hit the mark. sorry. well written with few errors which made a change from other authors who seem to get too excited with their writings.

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