by theseductivesiren
That Layla and Diana enjoy each other’s company is wild understatement. Liked the way you juxtaposed the “movie” with the real action — plays to your desire to write your own stories. Still intrigued while enjoying the intensity and passion.
pretty hot, but lacked a little imagination or adventure. good story but failed to hit the mark. sorry. well written with few errors which made a change from other authors who seem to get too excited with their writings.