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It got a bit confused upon playing pool. Who was Noel, and there was no dialogue about the forfeits going from flashing to Items of clothing.

A bit strange; is she or will she be a loving wife or just a slut to make money off of?

It’s great having a girlfriend who’s just a tad bit slutty.

So, are you not smart enough to spot the dichotomy between the 'girlfriend' in your title and the 'wives' in the category name? This story doesn't even clear the lowest hurdle, which is including a wife, much less actually meet any standards to belong in this category. Better luck next time.

Dear PrincessNutNut and Anonymous

It was a confusing night and a while ago!

But thank you, people, for alerting me to my proofreading shortcomings.

Of course, I changed the names after writing it just in case, but I thought I had caught them all.

Dear Anonymous

As to the category, we were living together, Carolyn and I, but I was yet to divorce, so she counted as my defacto wife, under our law.

Don't you think that's a bit nitpicky, tho?

True life is messy, in my experience.

@happipat - No, I don't think that's a bit nit picky as the legal entanglements of marriage are a major component of the drama that defines this category. The boyfriend/girlfriend relationship simply is inadequate to generate the same situations. Further, your explanation makes no sense, although I am curious where you live that has "de facto" wives that aren't wives...