All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Little Brother Pt. 01'

Really loved this! Can’t wait for more!!

Waiting for more chapters of the bully story, it’s one of the best I’ve ever read. Hope to see you continue it!

Best I have read in a long time. Excellent!

This is a sensational story and I hope you have time and creative energies to extend it. x

Love this. I've got five bitchy sisters and I'd have loved to steal one of their boyfriends

Loved this! Hope to see Seth and Evan grow even closer and leave that cunt Cara in the dust. 😉Happy writing!

Very hot!! I hope Seth and Evan continue to deepen their affair. There are hints of romantic feelings being involved, which would be nice to see

A very good story, I think he'd be better off with Evan than Cara I think she just uses!

Damn sexy story ! Was edging while reading !

I loved this story! Please continue.

The details and lust made this one of the best readings I've had in a while.

I loved this story

Hot story. I hope that there is a part 2.

sex with a women is great but bi is the new straight. everyone should experience sex with both sexes it makes you a better lover.

Soooo good. Part 2 please, he dumps her and they start dating..

This story is great so far. I like the characterisations, the pacing and the sex was hot and well described. Looking forward to chapter two.

Really great story. Loved the details around the conflicting and evolutionary feelings and attraction.

I feel like I’ve read this story before? I remember something along the lines of Evan moving out and getting a roommate, and closer to the end of the story he has an art gallery which Cara doesn’t attend?

OMG this was awesome. Hope you’ll consider writing more about these two!

Loved this story and want to read Part 2 asap. Please build the characters like how you did for this one :)

Wow really nice story.

Sequel when?

When's the sequel coming?

Excellent story, had me gripped throughout. Can't wait for part 2!

Please write a sequel! Phenomenal story!!

dying for the 2nd part!!

This didn't feel like a smut story, I really enjoyed the interaction between your characters. It felt very real! Thanks for sharing it.

Any ETA on pt 2 release date? Love this!!

I check your page daily for part 2! sending good vibes!

I've already commented but I needed to comment again. I went back and re-read this and it's just so, so great. So incredibly hot, and the conversation between Seth and Evan -- especially afterward -- feels so true-to-life. Of course we're all hoping for more but if not, I can imagine where things might go... :)

Hey *pokes* i need pt 2

Plz?

Part 2 posted today so I came to Part 1 to see what the story is about. Looking at all of the admiration and encouragement in the comments you don’t need my compliments but I need to give them. This is an amazing literary work and the erotica could not be more perfect. Following you now so I never miss a word. Wow.

Excellent please keep going i really enjoyed.

Good story although I could have done without Evans lace panties 😔. As a gay man, I want masculine guys as opposed to girly ones. Good story though, that's just my own preference

Awesome story and written from the perspective of sheer sexual in nature and not like it was unnatural at all.

I enjoyed the description of Evans's ass as the more that was said the harder I got and having experienced making love to an ass like that I came before you went into him for real.

I can't wait for the next part as I want to see where this goes.

Beautifully written, a masterpiece of literature and erotica. Well played.

Oh! Wonderful and sooooooooooo arousing! (Thanks for o.! )

My two kinks in one story, nice plump ass on a man and spanking!

PERFECTION! 5 stars, wish I could give you 10!

Excellent story! Can’t wait to read more in part 2!

very detail and sexy,, 5 stars

I don't know, I would have kicked Cara to the curb. Evan and I would have relocated and started our new life together.

This so much nicer than some of the Quickie stories on this site. This has flow and decent inflections.

loved the pacing of your story ,, very realistic

Loooooove this story