All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Revenge Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Exciting

Wow! Great job, I love this series. Keep it going and thanks for the excitement!

catamitecatamiteover 3 years ago

Nice job. I love the descriptions keep em cumming

jennerbill6jennerbill6over 1 year ago

I gave this 4 stars because it was better than part 1, but this still needs some editing. The writing still does not flow, and it needs more description of how the ladies felt, and more development of their fantasy. This has story has a lot of potential. Keep it up!

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