All Comments on 'Girls Just want to Have Fun'

What a great read, seemed so real lots of so well described action with a loving feel.

I know some people will dislike this and say it rubbish it would never happen but I'd sure put money on this being played out all over the world most nights.

Lucky people

I'm glad you liked it. I was worried that I was getting too mechanical with the logistics of it all, trying to follow 4 people.

With this story (along with several others) I was exploring an actual "what if" from my own past.

They know what they want...And we make sure they get it!

having a threesome or foursome is great...we were with a couple for a spell the the other male turned into an alpha...dont get me wrong four people in bed is hot....but when you can be in another room with some one...then that shows control and a lack of security in ones relationship....i would like to get back into it but not with them all tho his wife was great in more was then one...my wife liked him

I'm glad you liked it.

Group scenes are hard to write. The logistics of all the moving parts. The criss frosting emotions.

I can see how in real life one person might get left out or feelings of jealousy or humiliation might arise.

Which is why in real life my wife said "no." I definitely would've liked fucking her friend but the friend's hubby did nothing for my wife.