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Fuck that other dude this story was hot (I say that as a black man)

The dirty talk was up there. 5 stars

So fucking hot and dirty, with a great premise and attention to details. It really turned me on. I read and reviewed one of your stories ("New Neighbors") a while ago and really enjoyed it. It took me a while to read some more, but I'm glad I did. Love the way Jay teased Lexie and talked dirty to her before shoving a butt plug up her ass, and how she enjoyed grinding herself against the stranger in the club in order to push it in deeper. So nasty how Lexie had to go to the ladies' room and get off by having a phone sex with Jay. Nice touch with Jay wanting to hear her wetness while she fingered herself. His dirty talk was smoking hot. Lexie had a good idea, rubbing her clit with her thumb while fingering herself. I liked how Jay had her slap her pussy before she came. Smart choice to jizz into a jar, so she can consume it later. I wouldn't mind reading a follow-up where Jay fucks her that night, but the story was great either way. And the ending, where it turns out that all those women waiting in the line heard her LOL. My favorite parts were: "His hand had come up to hold her throat as he straightened up behind her. "No," he interrupted. "You are my slut now, you promised you'd do whatever I asked within reason. This is within reason. You're going to wear this plug while you're out hanging with your girlfriends, and then when you come back, I'm going to put a bigger plug in while I fuck your tight cunt. And after I've shot my load inside that sweet twat, you're going to get me hard again with that slutty mouth of yours, and I'm going to fuck your ass." He had licked the side of her throat. "And I want you to be so desperate for it the whole night that you're leaking pussy juices by the time you get back." He had moved his hands to cup her bare breasts - she hadn't put on a bra yet - and squeezed and kneaded them. Lexie had arched into his hands, more than ready to be a little late; the play by play of their plans tonight had driven her crazy."

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""Yes, daddy," Lexie panted as she moved the phone down closer to her panties. She pounded herself with her fingers, hoping the squishing noises she could hear were heard over the phone as well; not that she didn't love the idea of getting spanked, but she needed Jay to know just how hot she was for all of this.

As she jammed her fingers in and out of her soaking wet pussy, she used her thumb of the hand with the phone to rub her clit; she was already moaning, but she started getting louder. After a few minutes of the phone by her cunt, she moved it back up.

"Daddy, I'm soooooo close," she whined, her nipples hardening as she heard Jay's slick hand on his cock and his heavy breathing.

"Yeah, I bet you are, you dirty slut," he responded harshly. "I bet you look filthy, skirt up, legs spread, fingers between your legs, rutting like a bitch in heat against your fingers."

"Fuck," Lexie bit out. "More, daddy, more dirty talk, please."

"Yeah, I know what you like, you fucking whore," Jay moaned. "You want me to tell you what a nasty little slut you are. And you are, you know that; only a dirty whore would go out with a plug in her tight little asshole. Only a cumbucket would let a black cock fill her tight pussy with cream whenever it wanted. Only a filthy little slut would have to fuck herself in the bathroom because of how much she loves her slut holes being filled."

As he spoke, Lexie was getting so fucking close. She had three fingers fucking into her wet, hot hole with her thumb rubbing her hard clit; if only she had one more hand, then she could pinch and squeeze at her nipples. She moaned into the phone, "Oh god, daddy, I'm so close, please tell me you're close, I want you to shoot that cream for me at the same time."

Jay grunted. "Yeah, I know you do, you little cum slut; you want my cum more than you want to cum yourself, huh? Slap that pussy for daddy, baby cunt," he ordered harshly.

Lexie immediately followed orders and spanked her pussy, getting her lips with a nice, severe blow, and gave a jagged cry when the sensation hit. Pussy juice splattered a bit over her thighs when she did it

"Fuck," Jay hissed. "Again, baby."

Lexie did it again, with the same result.

"I'm about to shoot my load," Jay gritted out, "and I'm going to imagine coating your face with my hot cum, and I know you'd love it because you love getting facials like the hot little slut you are, and I know you'd love it because you're going to cum listening to me talk about covering you with cum."

He wasn't wrong. Lexie keened low and hard as she came, her hips rutting into her hand, imagining her boyfriend's load warm on her face. The tremors kept on coming as she kept jerking from her orgasm; over the phone, she could hear Jay coming, too; he always did it so loud. She fucking loved it.

"That's it, you slut, take my load, take that cream all over your face, you nasty little cum bucket," he groaned out.

She waited for her breathing to even out, then hopped off the counter. "Thanks, baby," she said.

"I shot my load into a jar for you to eat later," he promised, and Lexie froze, her just satisfied pussy clenching again. Despite everything that had just happened, those words were so fucking hot, Lexie was about to touch herself again."

So hot and nasty. Keep up the great work. You are very passionate, kinky and talented. I jerked off while reading this story and I came so hard. Then I looked at your profile photo and jerked off again. I will definitely continue reading your erotic tales.