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Click hereYour phone was blowing up with notifications for hours, and when you got in the car to drive home that night you sat in the parking lot furiously rubbing your pussy while you looked at the photos and watched the videos that filled your text messages and you came again and again until the car seat was slick with the wetness flowing from your poor pussy.
Second-person only works in situations that call for it such as, "Jill you were so drunk last night that you turned into a skank! You let this creepy guy expose your bra, and later you banged him!" It does not work in the place of first person or omniscient.
Once again you have proven 2nd person just don't work well with a short story.
What's with the second person narrative? Horrible. The story wasn't any better either of course. Pretty lame, seems to be typical with this writer...
Honestly I really liked it. Not for the poor schmuck husband of the wife in question, but rather for the story itself, and the erotica of it. After all isn't that what this site was founded on. Or maybe this story should have been put in the non consent forum? Especially since that's where all the good stories have migrated to. Thanks for sharing it.