All Comments on '"Give Me The Remote" Pt. 01'

Fantastic! Five stars for a great story. Thanks.

Just love when I see you posted a new story.

I love the JB44 universe and try to figure out if I have seen any of the characters before.

I didn't get any right this time.

BuT still love the story.

Isn't benhurst Colorado in another one of your stories

Too slow and obscure for me. Barely made it through the first page, then found the last page had no connection to the first page, and it was still about girls dancing to music I guess a hip reader is supposed to be familiar with? Not even going to try. But thanks for the effort.

I waited until reading parts 2 & 3 to rated this one. First impression is that it is incomplete. Yoy tricked me. 5*

Good job, thanks for sharing your work! I'm having a bit of trouble keeping all of the characters straight; what with double names for many of them and all...

The black light reminded me of an old porno from years ago. It was a good one, so was this story.

Need more when you can get to it; think that Hunter's Cabin with Darlene as assistant manager is gonna get even more "interesting" and can't wait to see how..,