All Comments on 'Giving In'

by Bradshaw77

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Yawn

You had a great start to the story but then it just sort of pittered off. Then when you finally got to the main event, you wrote it in such a bland way. Also, you told of previous sexual play without telling any details of it. That's just mean.

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