by Dreaming451
Love it. One suggestion. Maddy should talk dirty. Tell daddy she loves fucking. He should cum on her face. Hopefully dressing her up in lingerie. Sheer bra, satin garter belt and panties. Sheer stockings with frilly ankle socks and heels. Just a suggestion. Keep writing about this daddy daughter fuck fest.
Great story. My drop dead gorgeous, teenage daughter has been pissing on me for about six months now. I can’t wait for her to walk off her school bus, into the house and find me kneeling in her bedroom literally shaking I am sooooooo fucking turned on and just start pissing all over me as I jerk off to her perfect big tilted body. She owns me body and soul and I wouldn’t have it any other way.
I loved this story! Anonymous, that's just your fantasy. Please keep it going like this!! No more of that dirty, shitty porn stuff I'm used to reading and what Anonymous wants to turn it in to!
Not even remotely believable. Unless your intention was to make a cartoon of it, it was horrible. If you did intend to make it a cartoon, then it's not horrible, just stupid.
OMG so fucking hot. i fantasise about my daughter who is 23 now, i get stiff looking at her, and ive dreamed so long about wanting to do just this!! i am throbbing right now!! Great story, more please!!!
Anonymous wants it to be lame. As stated, it's a suggestion. If anonymous doesn't like it, stop reading. Great first story and even without suggestions, continuation is welcome.
Wow all, thank you for the lovely comments. So unexpected. I'm so happy you liked my gross story - more soon.
I thought it was well written. He staged it perfectly and I was riveted from beginning to end with a longingly anticipation ! Good job !
I stopped reading when you started with the pissing, That is a total turn off. one star