All Comments on 'Giving in to Perfection'

Great story of feet and sph, two of my fave kinks! Well done! I would love to see more!

Premise with potential.

But it was over before it had barely started. Not nearly enough teasing before he ejaculated.

Needed dialog. Had he masturbated to her? What did he dread about while he masturbated to her? What did he want to do with/to her? What did he want her to do to/with him?

Did he watch porn while he masturbated? What kind? Was it male-submissive, fetish porn? How about watching some together so she could see -- and comment on -- what he liked? Would he like to do those things with her? Etc...

Three stars.

(BTW- there's a difference between MESSAGE and MASSAGE...

How about showing her how he masturbated, but not be allowed to cum.

Interesting premise.

But much too short.

Four stars.

hope you've got a day job