All Comments on 'Glass Becomes Me'

...feel with their mind, this story will be one of your faves.

What a way to start MY day Pie ! I sit here on this saturday morning...find this link on my yahoo and check it out. So glad I did... YOU just put a step in my walk. The build up was SO well done. I felt like I was cheering you on (and me). Please continue to post more. Your VERY good at story telling shug. Now... I am taking ME to the shower. GREAT JOB !

Lil Slice , your story left me a little breathless. I really didn't know what to expect when I started to read it. It was great. I can't say that I have felt the part of the missing bed partner buttttttttttt!!!!!! Not saying anymore or you'll know who this is. LOL The Nibbler

Exceptional story!! I love the sensual eroticism and building sexual fire!!

Great story Lil.. You've got me hard now what are you gonna do with it.. smiles

Hot enough to melt even the 'blues' in Lit! Great job!

Good stuff, lil... you got me 0 to hard in no time....

Beautiful buildup. The reader gets such a feeling for the hunger and desire inside the story teller. Keep up the good work!!

Lil Slice of Sweet Cherry Pie dripping with succulent juices that I'm gonna slurp up! Excellent story. If you need me for the cleanup crew, just give me a ring.

You had a potential for a reaaly good story, but the sex was mechanical (no pun intended) and predictable. Next time try to avoid some of the cliches' (exploding in orgasm, soaking wet) and use more creative phrases.

have to send this to a friend (thanks for the nice reading)

Very hot story...keep writing.

very nice cherry, I love stories about self pleasure, and that was a fine one..I know you have done that many times...and now I can picture it....thank you baby....aroused

Bravo...I loved every second of it. I just wish I was that glass dildo....maybe next time :)

i keep thinking about getting a glass one myself ... this certainly makes it sound appealing *grin* ...

I took a different view than everyone else seems to have here. I felt your longing for your lover. It was precious. I know that feeling. whistle

mmmmm just like how I would do it

A small story, if youcan call it that of a woman pleasuring herself.

Yes it contained some cliches, its difficult not to soem times, but I enjoyed, it, i could imagine being at the door watching her, as she pleasures herslef.

Keep up the lovely writing

Miranda

It got me to appreciate a woman's sexuality in a vey nice way.

please write more so i can get aroused reading more of your stories.

Nice little account of female masturbation (note spelling of this word, folks!). Brief, but still a turn-on - and unmistakeably poignant. well done, do try some more stories!

Wow. I was surprised at how well done the piece was for being so short. Perfect for us guys! lol Right to it but in a way that was so descriptive and erotic. I encourage you to write more!