All Comments on 'Glen Ivy Hot Springs Pt. 01'

by Loves_music_loves_to_dance

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encore769encore769almost 10 years ago
Enticing

I'm married but the whole story excited me to no end and wishing I was there. It is so erotic and enticing, I identified with her and felt each look in his eye and each touch of his hand. Sounds like a wonderful place to go to meet a stranger, then opening up to the sweet pleasures and his tenderness. encore769@yahoo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Been here many times but always with girlfriends or alone. I would LOVE to have had your experience. HOT.

JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
Muddy mysterious

So, who is he? Teasing opening promises great developments away from the mud and showers. Get down and dirty . . .now!

Loves_music_loves_to_danceLoves_music_loves_to_dancealmost 10 years agoAuthor
Typos!! Grrrr

With all the rereading of my submissions I do, it is so frustrating to find typos...

Omg HOW is he here? Not hope...

And "fondling " one another not fondly...

"He" is different people in my mind at different times. Maybe he's a friend from college I have seen in years, but we're flirty Facebook friends. Maybe he's a guy I met from literotica feedback, and we've been emailing sexy stuff for weeks. Maybe he's my hubby, taking a day off work to surprise me (unheard of) and we pretend to be strangers. "He" can be whoever you need him to be...

JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
@ Loves music

Typos are annoying (we ALL have them despite numerous read throughs) but I wasn't distracted. Well, not by the typos . . .

Will6969doWill6969doover 9 years ago
Use to live in Corona

Loved both the "Springs" and the available wives that would cum there during the (husband's) work week. Both were so hot and wet!

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