All Comments on 'Gloria's Transformation - The Sadists'

This story has been unfairly criticized and scored unjustifiably low by Whackdoodle and others who failed to realize Gloria’s body has been dramatically altered. That fact would have been obvious to these people if they had actually read the beginning of the story or even just the title. Of course, the genetic changes to her body are now just science fiction, a category in which the story perhaps should have been placed, but I was seeking a wider readership in the non-consent/reluctance category.

one of the best stories on lit, continue writing more!