by TrampsAnThieves
Great job of describing what is in your imagination. I see certain ties to your other stories. Strangely compelling story's that keep ones interests.
I don't think 6 chapters will be enough. This is a fun story that I want to keep going and going. Wonder what magic or skills enhancement Dera will receive? They are becoming quite the capable little band. Reav's invisibility and teleporting could come in handy when they reach the imprisoned ones loyal to Zora. He could swipe keys and weapons to free and supply them to finish their escape. Egla's little friends give them eyes that no-one will likely expect or detect. A perfect way to scout every detail of the prison before making any moves. The birds could even deliver messages to the captives that help was near. Can't wait for more.