All Comments on 'Goblin Queen's Plan Ch. 03'

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Mike9947Mike99475 months ago

It’s a great story but I am having trouble keeping track of names and skills.

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew5 months ago

This is a great little story. I hope it ends up being longer than 6 chapters.

skippersdadskippersdad5 months ago

That was great, can not Waite for more.

Coochielover71Coochielover715 months ago

Can hardly wait to read your next submission to see where we go from here.

shadrachtshadracht5 months ago

Very entertaining story! I assume that only the primary form is being shared here - his half-elven blood with theirs? Otherwise, wouldn't Kia and Bish also have learned how to speak goblin, since he's got a bunch of goblin blood as part of his now? (And dark elf, and now troll)

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I know - probably too many details. But the gamer in me wants to know the mechanics.

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In any case, loving it. 5*

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I was wondering if the troll hide could be used as body armor for everyone. Give all of them some added defenses. A much better use for such a precious resource than selling it. I wonder if he could repair any damage the hide armor could theoretically receive? Since it was living and him having a bit of troll in him now maybe its possible.

More skills and people in their little band. They are quite the magical special forces team. All the wolf meat will probably come in handy when they free Zora's loyalists. The woman feeding them can likely only give them so much food. They will need to heal and eat before being ready for battle to take the throne back.

TrampsAnThievesTrampsAnThieves5 months agoAuthor

[shadracht] I thought it would be too overpowered to share more than their original traits. [anon] Stop reading ahead .. ;)

shadrachtshadracht5 months ago

@ T&T - that makes sense.

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Also, I could totally see this being an adventure / dating sim / hentai game. Loving it!

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now5 months ago

Really loving this tale - saga!

silverbeard85silverbeard855 months ago

So how far into Baldur's Gate 3 were you when this story began forming in your mind? lol

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