All Comments on 'Goblins' Mate Pt. 01'

Pluses and minuses.

Rape is still rape.

Hopefully chapter 2 will see a greater relationship developm.

Definitely need more of this story!

I'm hoping for more character development. Get away from the rapey bit a bit more and have him be more willing to help them. Idk how he hasn't figured out what the curse is, he noticed its only women in the camp, no men or children, and they've made it pretty obvious they need his seed. He should have figured it out by now.

I really am not that fond of long stories but you writing is concise and flows so well I would read a novel written like this.