All Comments on 'God Damn My Heart'

Loneliness is a powerful force!

5

Short and very very sweet.

No need to comment on the writing, excellent as usual.

Very romantic. Very sad. But hopefully it works out in the end. You got another hit. 5 stars

Nice. A ray of sunshine in the morning to start the day. Thanks much.

Great job. Short, but very sweet.

Actually worth a five. One of those rare times you step outside of your comfort zone and write a story that doesn't have an infuriatingly weak beta male protagonist.

Wish you would do this more often. 5*

Great little short story. Emotionally very powerful. Five stars.

Love how you linked her feelings/hesitancy to poignant lyrics. Nice ending — sometimes, maybe even more often than we think, relationships are salvaged. Yes, you could have crafted a longer piece around the demise of their relationship and/or followed up with their renewal, but why — this short piece was perfect. 5*****. Enjoy your writing/talent.

Nice story. Mistakes are made couples fall out of love with each other. At least they think they do. Yes I know its just a story but I hope they make it. Thank you for the story.

Wow, a sweet story from Cagivagurl? Keep it up.

Hopefully since the divorce she is at a place in her almighty career where she will be able to show him that she can and will spend time with him. Otherwise, they will just be casual friends with benefits whenever she can get in town.

Nice premise. Very different for you. 5-star effort.

Hooked

Really good story, especially considering it's brevity.

Awesome, thank you Cagivagurl! Touching. I wonder, though: has anything changed? Sure, they both realize they made mistakes. Yet, she is flying to meeting him because she has finished up her business trip. I would hope that they (and she, where her travel was the breaking point) have a new solution.

Very well done. D

Great story, as usual from Cagivagurl. Always a "must read," and this is no exception. Not sure why some commentators feel like they gotta take a swipe while making a compliment. Can't just enjoy a dope story? Anyway, five stars, of course. Randi.

great story

All those stories on Literotica with 2nd chances ... all it takes is just one for two.

Oh, how true this story feels. I love every word, Cagivagurl. ‘5’ Stars from me!

I wasn't sure where the story was going at the beginning, but the transition and conclusion were pure brilliance, among your best work! 5* (Agree with Hooked, I was surprised to see you in this genre, but you're one of the writers on my stalking list, so here I am...LOL)

Liked it. Been a minute since I have read a story where I like both the main characters.

I like longer stories usually but definitely enjoy these "flash" stories that tell a complete tale and this was a wonderful tale. I'm a sucker for well handled reconciliation stories. 5 stars.

Great little story.

Damm ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very good.

Love it! And it's short; I didn't have to read it over several days.

Wow, that was short, realistic and sweet. Very good story.

Damn, girl. This one came out of nowhere. Definitely a 5.

Cagivagurl.. sometimes your stories make me so fucking angry, and sometimes, likes this One a Little year of happiness fall on the screen

So far, so good...FTDS

This was a very poignant little romance. Well written and with lots of emotion. Nice job and five stars from me.

Even in a short story you nailed the emotions. 5*

Really well done Cagivagurl

Tastefully done. Clever use of a song. Definitely a five!

WOW! I don't know what else to say. Perfect!! Damn, I got something in my eye.

Pretty sad when people make the wrong choices. A marriage takes work and dedication. It's a partnership and a full time one at that. Communication is the key. Good story.

Nice one bud

A nice little story about how we sometimes screw things up in our lives then have to realize what we did and decide to try and fix them. Well done.

Well done!!!!

Damn! I enjoyed this.

Awesome, right to the point, how I lost my wife of 35 years

Beautiful story. Short and to the point. Just fantastic.

Just stumbled onto this. I don't know how I missed it. Yes, I do. Romance. I don't usually read these. (It makes me cry.) Get back together, guys. Stupid is as stupid does. The Bear approves. 5 stars. It's nice when people realize they screwed up because of pride, or whatever. I really do like this one. Keep writing, Cagivagurl.

The BEAR

Sometimes this author hits just the right note. Liked this story a lot. Separated from the major love of my life at 29- a Ukrainian girl on Cyprus, had a child and then sepereated over what we later both realized were trivial concerns. Took a failed marriage and a dead spouse between us to realize our youthful stupidity. And massive regrets over not raising a dauigjhter I didn't know I had for almost twenty years. Many, even myself, may have quibbles about this authors story premises but she is an excellent writer and would make a fne novelist.

A beautiful, bitter-sweet story that leaves us with hope for a positive ending.

Full of hope. Great story.

The reconnecting was way to fast, not very realistic

Too idealic.

You write very well and with a great deal of emotional description.

Damn. You write hope and reconciliation really well. I love it!

Yay for the modern career girl...

More!

Way more!

Great writing. Guy is a fool to go back. She was still traveling just as much

Well written. Though I'd like to see where they end up the ending is fitting for the story. We're can use or imagination. She's had ab epiphany and maybe she can change... maybe they both can accommodate each other best. Nice.

One of the best you have written in my opinion just wish it was more than a page.

Not sure why some commenters think he is anfool to want her back. Obviously now she is ready to leave her job. She was probably willing after his ultimatum to wind down but it came too late and she held onto her pride while he was too wounded. Why can't they start over?

This good short story is as real as life.That makes it a winner. The story is way to short,take that as a compliment. I have said it about husbands' and it also applies to her/wives. Relations and Family first, a job is a means to an end.She deserved her situation and he would be a fool to renew the relationship,she has already shown he will always come second...But Caviagurls MCs all seem to lack backbone,conviction and resolve..

To Anonymous 7 days ago and all the others that think like he/she thinks, You kon't believe people can change? What planet are you living on? Maybe you can't change. Maybe you don't believe in forgiveness, even when someone clearly admits they were wrong. If he's miserable without her, why not chance it? He's already suffering. Why not take a chance on happiness? Everyone doesn't have the same twisted beliefs that you have.

The story does not address the root of the problem. She loves her job just doesn't like to travel ? Seems like travel is her job. These two wold be a lot better off if they stayed apart and just met for an occasional fuck fest when they felt the need.

Maybe you can go home?! Thank you!

The story is so short that it can be read multiple times, and it should be read because author packed a lot of emotion and romantic drama into very few words. 5*.

There are always possibilities and with that one more chance.

Nice short story, made my day……. Thanks for writing.

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To the author:

on numerous occasions you confuse a noble husband with a faggot husband

Too easy - not even close to believable - really could have been good, but just disappointing...

Very touching, a piece of the human comedy. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Lovely story. Short but to the point. Clear 5 stars.

Lovely romance, you are an excellent romance writer, this brought a tear to my eye. Good writers do that.

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