by mypinkpearl
I could see it all, and because of your picture on your profile it was you I saw, lovely.
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A beautifully writen story. You have a wonderful gift for visualization.
Brilliantly written, the sexual tension rising throughout, and a skilful flourish!
I love arses...and the description of her arse and how he adores it is beautiful!
Loved it! I was pulled right into the story and could imagine myself in his place gazing at your lovely arse. Wow. Well done.
I think this is her best submission yet. Each story seems to get a bit more visual. There is some lovely imagery and wonderful similes. I look forward to future submissions.
Will never look at a woman's ass in quite the same way! Wonderfully descriptive...
Great story, loved begining and the ending, that's clever.
Always enjoy reading stories with mast. involved.
Keep up the good work, very enjoyable.
Oh my goodness. I love the description of a fine ass. And looking at yours while I read the story made it even better.