All Comments on 'God is a Slut Ch. 05'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Holy fuck

The amount of effort that went into this is crazy. I applaud the author!

Anonymousover 3 years ago

FYI: You wrote: "pupils dilated as though she'd been stuck with morphine"

Opiates do not dilate pupils, they cause pupils to pinpoint. Stimulants, (amphetamines, primarily, not necessarily 'meth' because it is a garbage drug, frequently.) Psychodelics, such as peyote, (cactus flowers), psilocybin mushrooms and LSD cause extreme pupil dilatation.

Still lovin' it.

GeoD

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I write erotic novels because my imagination is vivid and fucked up, and if I keep those thoughts bouncing around in my head, I'll get brain cancer. So now, I'm putting them in your head. If you like debauched high fantasy, religion-gone-wrong, shameful incest or just boring o...

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