All Comments on 'God Save The Devil Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Cannot wait

Sure that revenge will be a sight to see.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Pretty intense. Hope the same intensity stays in the next part.

MotorpenisMotorpenisover 11 years ago
Beautiful

The story brought a smile to my face. Revenge in business is all about patience & the sweetness of execution

Looking forward to more of this. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
revenge

revenge is a dish best served cold

wrighterwrighterover 11 years ago
waiting

yup, need to read more, post soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sequel

When do you plan to write the sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Doesn't ring true

The storie cried out for an editor to clean up confusing sentences, and help the author make his points more clearly. Vague references to trouble makers, legal loopholes, all fuzzy, and the story would be improved with more detail. Perhaps the author's English is a little light, which again an editor might help.

OldpartOldpartalmost 11 years ago
A good start

looking good so far....Burn The Bad Guy (BBG) ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
super

wow

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
It really needs an editor

The translation into English was poorly done.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

wow after two years i am reading this still getting excitted

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