All Comments on 'Goddamned Superheroes'

Interesting. What brings the fights to Travis' doorstep and how does he know what's going to happen? Congrats on the setup and I look forward to reading more.

Just plain, stinkin' fun. Thank you for a little humor this day.

Thanks!

This was great.

Had to laugh at "Superhero Hazard Indemnification Taskforce".

Government S.H.I.T. I love it!

I enjoyed this story. The new perspective was a great departure from a normal superhero story type. I do have some criticisms however.

1. More details are needed. Physical descriptions of the characters for example.

2. There were a lot of missed comedic opportunities.

3. The length of the story. This story could easily be 2-3 times longer. And I'm sure most would agree.

Hope this helps. Keep it up.

Agree with 5-point Anon: funny, but would love it to be longer, more details. Keep writing!

[16.06.23]

Excellent erotic version of Marvel Comics' Damage Control created by Dwayne McDuffie (writer) and Ernie Colon (artist).

11/10!!!!!

So, something very jarring for me. You introduce a gruff construction worker named Lou. I did not see any sign this character was a woman until 7 paragraphs later when Travis says she has a nice ass.

Too little characterisation. Much like the comic book backstory. Must try harder, please…

Great story. I'd like it even more if it was longer or had multiple chapters. Thanks!