All Comments on 'Goddess'

Nice to see the Middle Eastern/North African ladies finally getting some rep. I'm not particularly keen on writing them myself but it's refreshing to see a writer eager to highlight their appeal.

NOT bad, outside of the part where her fingers move "up down" without the obvious (you'd think) "and".

Contrived; dismayingly short on plot and character development; little to nothing to do with the theme of the contest.