All Comments on 'Goddess, Take The Wheel'

Hope to see more!

Don't leave us hanging too!

It was a simple beginning. Only one page but with a twist in the end. It gives you a general indication of her being a sadistic rather than loving mistress and him as a submissive who has not yet been completely beaten down. Interesting to see where you go with this but I would suggest 2/3 pages per instalment. 1 page is enough to wet the interest but not necessarily to keep the interest in future instalments.