All Comments on 'Goddess, Temptress or Bimbo'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Easy, Tiger

I like those little allusions thrown in :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Oh yeah

That story was hot although the comment made at the end about changing them both would make another excellent story.

Floydman1Floydman1over 2 years ago

Wow!

As someone who read Calvin and Hobbes voraciously as a kid this is amazing. This is Calvin and Suzie as married adults still hopelessly in love and having fun, and...just like the way Bill Watterson wrote the comic, I can't tell what's in his head or what's really happening. This is one of my new favorite stories!

"Easy, tiger," was a brilliant touch and callback. 10/5 stars!

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Hi! My name is Chloe, and I've been a big fan of hypnosis and mind control stories for a long time, and in the last year I've started writing them myself! Sometimes it's just erotic fiction, but mostly it's erotic hypnosis, and other mind-control type things. Male victims, fem...