All Comments on 'Going Back for More Pt. 01'

It might kill him but he'll die happy!

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*****Good opening chapter looking for to the continuation. Thanks for sharing.

In one paragraph wife number three is five years younger. Several paragraphs later it’s ten years AND you call attention to the fact. That’s what’s called, in movies, a continuity error.

This isn't a movie and you didn't have to pay to read it. I am only an enthusiastic amateur.