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by Dirty_Old_Man3

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AzuldrgonAzuldrgonover 18 years ago
Tempting

This was a little on the fantastic side, but the adventures are out of this world. Good job on the description and the setup. I thought this was well written and wish this place actually existed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wrong person

Would be 100 times better in the 3rd person.

There is nothing worse than reading about your hairless pussy and your breasts when you are male. Remember your readership. At least half are male,. If you are only writing for one person, send them a letter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Hot

Very hot story. Great description and great characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Hot

Very hot story. Great description and great characters.

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Used to love to write normal stories, but now I have moved on to BIGGER and more FANTASTIC things. Like most authors, none of my stories are 100% truth, but most of us would be lying if we said that none of it was based on a combination of other people we know and experiences...