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Click here"Not at all," Marie said brightly. "Mommy, will you hold my hand?"
"Oh, sweetie, that's so thoughtful of you. Of course." So mother helped daughter onto her father's cock, his erection disappearing inside of his offspring's sweet pussy for the second time that night. And as Marie moved up and down his shaft, Carol watched in happiness, knowing she had arranged the best outcome possible.
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Marie1990: omg u will never guess what happnd
Valygrl18: what
Marie1990: we went all the way
Marie1990: and mom knows
Valygrl18: :0 no fukn way
Marie1990: true she wanted us together!
Marie1990: even better... we're all movn to live near college
Marie1990: i think i have a new bf!
Ugh... what a terrible ending. I'm just glad it's over. I'm extremely disappointed. Especially with Marie. I thought the twist was Mom had cancer. Not that she's a stupid whore.
A little different but really kind of sweet. I loved the build up
between father and daughter. Mom was a surprise with her son .
To each their own. It really does not matter incest is incest .
These other comments really kind of shock me. Sounds as
some are forgetting what going on here .
YOU JUST RUINED THE STORY BY HAVING THE SKANK CAROL FUCKING HER SON FOR OVER 5 YEARS!! THEN SHE MANIPULATED HER HUSBAND AND DAUGHTER TOGETHER AND BLAMES THE H7SBAND FOR MOVING ON THE SLUT DAUGHTER!!
THE SLUT DAUGHTER GETTING EXCITED OVER THE MOTHER AND DON FUCKING!!
THE HUSBAND HAS BEEN A CUCK FOR OVER 5 YEARS!!
A WEAK WIMP WHO SHOULD HAVE MOVED AWAY FROM THE TRAILER PARK TRASH FAMILY THEN HAVE SLUT MARIE FIND HIM AND STAY WITH HIM!
HOW DOES TIM SUDDENLY LIKE YOUNGER WOMAN WHEN HE MARRIED AUNTY 15 YEARS OLDER!!
SPENDING MANY EVENINGS WITH JUST HER SON, OBVIOUS THE SKANK WAS FUCKING HIM!!
DADDY AND DAUGHTER SHOULD HAVE MOVED ON AWAY FROM THE BITCH CAROL!!
Difficult to start.
Dad: I'm pretty sure that without mom's manipulation he wouldnt have touched his daughter, nor would the daughter have touched him. Later on having his daughter blow him while his wife is telling him how she's been cheating on him for 5 years with his son and son's friend and girlfriend makes him a complete cuckolded idiot.
Daughter is a complete slut. She seems to like that her mother cheated her father and gets turned on by it.
Mother is a manipulative cheating whore. Nuf said. Probably the worst woman I've met on Literotica
The 2 things i dislike most are non-consent and cheating. Unfortunately I cant give less that 1 star. Woud have preferred 1/100 unfortunately 1/5
I can relate to the last part of that story cause my wife and our son have been seeing other every weekend for about the last 6 months - she visits and they go for a meal and then she spends the night with him.
I liked the story up until this chapter. It was well written. Sorry, superbly written. But the mom-son affair reason just killed the story for me.
Story was nice and ok as it progressed. But the ending sealed it with a beautiful kinky twist. Can't ask for more than that.
Really liked this story, until the cheating. Completely ruined the whole story. Carol basically whored her daughter to absolve her own guilt. It was clear she was hiding something, but I was surprised and disappointed with the reveal.
hot from stare to finsh ,you have a grate fell for it who you put it together love to read more of your stufe .So more soom pls yours leann xxxxxxx
hi my favorite writer on this site is shoguy. her stories have thesame kind of build up as this one..great job.
Amazing! Captivating! Clever! Great plot & details to hook you!! A+++
wonderful little incest tale...great story line, very inventive!! had me hooked all the way, and that is saying a lot !!
i could make a few criticisms but that would be nit picking,,,,well done,, its a keeper,,,will save and read again soon!! thank you!
Great job! Good story build up. A few comments though for future stories.
1. Use "cum" not "come." The former is sexual secretion, the latter to move towards.
2. I was disapointed with the lack of detail of what seemed as the pinnacle erotic moment of Carol assisting their daughter onto Tim. This could have been a perfect minajatwa scene ending the story in a climax.
3. The texting parts seem disconnected and unnecessary to the story, unless it is a prelude to an event in the future?
Other than those points, it is very well done.
A comment to the other comments. I find it odd that the readers find the insest acceptable but have a problem with the "cheating." It's not cheating if a "couple" agrees to multiple partners. Monogamy is not natural and should be the decision of the individual, not society. If it's againt your beliefs, that's on you to make that clear with your partner; shouldn't be assumed.
---mo
Love your writing and would love more, a sequel or something new. Just write more.