by beaverhunt
Strong follow up chapter!
This one was great because it contained all the desire and emotions of their initial coupling. The only thing that was missing was the aroma of fresh urine covering your body, which is what makes it a total 5 sense turn-on.
Speaking of 5, that’s the number of stars this story gets too!
Well done!
I was so looking forward to the next chapter, but you just wrote the same story twice.