by HypnoticGold
So nasty but I loved it! I wonder how Cindy will feel about her friend jerking Danny boy off?? Great series!
Great story! How long will you make us wait for the next part?
Very repetitive. Anything you built up the first 3 chapters has really taken a nose dive into boredom. You really shouldnt have added him being submissive because hes not even a main character now. Hes just there to do as hes told and it really hasnt been interesting since part way into chapter 3. The fact he hasnt even gotten laid is disappointing. Id maybe stick around for that but you made him a total bitch who cant even live his own life now without him being told to do. Very disappointed you choose this path.
As predicted he's being blackmailed into submission. It's not what he really wanted, it's non-consent and I hate that.
I agree with the previous commenters, turning him into an extreme submissive with the blackmail elements completely derailed what started as an interesting story about a guy exploring his fetish. This should have ended after chapter 3 imo.
This is absolutely as depraved as things like this can get. And as dirty. And as sexy.
And your editing isn't improving at all.