All Comments on 'Goldie Goes Country'

Another enjoyable story from you.

Boyd

followup - see flight of the old grouch

again, a nice story. but again, parts of it seem rushed.

you are either an amazing prolific writer or posting from an archive. regardless, you really should have someone else go over these stories, to catch the weaknesses and plot holes.

You do have some good ideas unfortunately the execution is lacking.

to Ted and Goldie. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I think you left out something like how come Goldie didnt answer his calls and when he asked tag and he said Mackie had`nt seen her in three days so where was she during those three days was she doing drugs during the parties?

Pat

I would like to find out those answers myself.

is kind of an understatement. This was more like an outline than a whole story. There wasn't time to get to know the characters, even if this is a sequel. You can do better, I've read some where you do.

Just curious about the pregnancy. Who is the father of her child? Is it her husband's or is it the result of the swapping done with Joe and Jennie back in the story "Far Away Joe's"? Could be an interesting story line if baby is Joe's.

You share the passion and the emotion well thank you -

Why is it the when people don't want to be found they run to a place where they can be found? So why do it in the first place? Dumb, huh?

If Ted had this wealth and toys, why in world would you drop off new bride and leave on business. Either Goldies try out or the meetings could be rescheduled. Then he reacted without letting Goldie having a chance to represent herself. I am glad it worked out but it almost didn't. You dont turn your nieve spouse out with the vipers alone.

Good story very well written. Grey Eagle captures feelings very well. Could use more as the story picks up with Dolly