All Comments on 'Gone Fishin''

A boy's unadulterated love of his father well told. The perspective is right. The craftsmanship perfect, classical.

This was a wonderful story with lots of well-described yearning and tension. It was a good decision to make the father "straight." It gave the eventual seduction a much greater payoff than if the father was eager.

I've always thought this story was hot. Ever since I read it for the first time on The Nifty Archives. When it was published by R. Keith Peck in 1996. If you arn not Mr. Peck, presenting other people's work as your own is plagiarism.

I'm glad you liked the story. I'm am Keith Peck, and have been since 1965. I don't know how to prove to you that I'm the original author; I can only assert that I am.

Wow--well done. An amazingly full, complex story--loving, intense, mythical, detailed: literary.

I love the hero-worship of his dad and really enjoyed the audaciousness of such lines as: "... and father's and son's souls communed in that eternal moment. You don't need to know about that. It's private."

Re the question of plagiarism, it could clarify things to put a precursor in the story, in italics, stating this is original work reproduced from an early publication, and cite that first publication source data. This really is quite a good story, and it's a testament to fairness and talent that people want authors to receive their due.

Thanks for sharing.

I wished my daddy used me more often then he did. I loved it when me made me suck him off and then him rubbing his big

cock on my face. If he was horny and no one was around he would fuck me hard and after he shot his load he made me lick him clean. This brings back fond memories!

This story is fucking hot, it got me so wet. I was fingering myself the whole time while reading this. Love the writing style.

Adored it, well written, hot SO descriptive! Perfect for those lonely afternoons... ^_^

I have to say this was THE best father/son stories I've read here so far. I was so engrossed in it. It was a beautiful love story. So passionate and just raw with emotion. I loved it!

I read this story many years ago and now I'm reading it again. It's still one of the best written, more emotional, erotic, deep father/son stories I've ever found on the Net!

Wonderful interaction between a Dad and his Son, not just the usual "suck+fuck" but true love and family bonding. I only wish there were more stories like this...

This is the reason why this web named LITEROTICA

This is the best father-son fuck story I've ever read! The author is simply brilliant! Like so many sons, the one in this story is fascinated by what his father's got jumping in his pants. It looks so darn fat and meaty! This happens lots more than people care to think about. Even straight boys, let alone gays, are drawn to their daddy's dick and balls. It's what brought them into this world, via their mother's cunt. Plenty of young straight guys wonder what dad's prick would feel like in their mouth, or how it would feel with dad fucking them up the ass like a girl. Meanwhile, the father looks at his son's sweet little mouth and cute boyish butt and thinks,"My big prick would fit real nice shoved into that!" Dad's got lots of warm semen in his big fatherly balls, just waiting to get unloaded up his boy's twitching asshole. A boy raising his ass way high, spreading his cheeks and showing his dad the target, a father grinning as he places his big prick at his boy's hole and shoves it in, up to his balls--just beautiful!

I have to say that this is literally the best incest story i have ever read. The way it was written made it so intense that i felt like i was there by that boulder.. it was amazing

Amazing so well done not only do u provide a great storyline but the detail is very good u do a great job in trying to make the scenery as vivid as possible I hope u continue this story . I would be back for more of u did . Cus now the fathers up for it and it good very interesting

Was and always been my one and only ultimate Fantasy.

Thank You

AND I HATE FISHING. I WAS SO VERY, VERY LUSTFULLY STIMULATED AND HELD SO EMOTIONALLY DURING THIS MARVELOUS LOVE STOREY. I FELT SO MUCH EROTIC, SENSUAL LOVE, I WAS EXTREMELY OVER WHELMED AND STIMULATED. IT TOOK ME AWHILE TO CALM MYSELF AFTER READING ABOUT THESE TWO SUPER LOVELY LUSTFUL MEN. IN MY HUMBLE OPINION THOUGH, I CERTAINLY MISS DADDY BEING MADE LOVE TO BY HIS SON. MAYBE IT'S IN THE WORKS, I'LL KEEP LOOKING. LOVED IT AND REALLY LOVED YOUR WRITING, HYPNOTIC AT TIMES. THANK YOU SO MUCH. XO

That was actually beautifully written! It was like poetry and smit had become one in the same. I really enjoyed the writing. The story of course too, but wow!!

Great story!

An eloquent expression of the confluence of lust and love between men. That they're related only makes it hotter, if that's even possible.