by UnfalteringAngelToo
I think it could have been better but I thought there was alot of potential there. It seemed very romantic and sweet the emotion between them. Almost as if they had known each other forever. Yet they had just met so it seemed alittle strange. Plus you changed their names... at first Erik was spelled Eric then it became Erik? And first Jenny and then Jenni? It kindof bugged me lol.
But other then that it was a lovely story :)
I would love to see a sequel! What a sweet couple, and Your descriptions of sex are so erotic and beautiful.
This is a true example of erotica at it's best! It stands alone as is and is well crafted to say the least.
I would like to see a sequel detailing the happily(or not so happily, your choice of course)ever after or at least the morning after. ;)
Please keep up the exceptional work!
This was an excellent and erotic tale. I loved it. The story just kept getting better and the sex even hotter. Any chance we will read more about these two? Thanks for such an erotic and well told story.
That story was totally hot.It was sexy and very erotic. Please continue with more chapters. I going to love forward reading more stories written by you Unfaltering Angel
Believable and to the point, jet not vulgar. It could have happened? The cuffs are a real treat too!
Good stuff, but i don't get the plot hook of her being homeless.
I sure hope there is wayyy more to this story... it reminds me of the kids saying about finding a pet... MOM! can i keep her?