All Comments on 'Good Harbor Beach'
by UAlbanyGirl518
- 10 Comments
legsfeettoesalmost 5 years agoDid better with the word limit than I could. Nice. Five stars. I like Monica's mother. Let's hope Dad doesn't drop something on the floor later or go searching for something under the beds.
Shady_Ladyalmost 5 years agoA great full story packed into 1,000 words. Love the little twists of the Mother kicked the boxer shorts under the bed.
Alwaystabooalmost 5 years agoThis could lead to a very fun summer
silverlock17almost 5 years agoI've spent a lot of time there, this felt so real which is very impressive given the word limit, and yes the Vista has a sign advertising Free HBO (at least they used to). Very nice story with real characters.
Soma99over 4 years agoReally made me smile, much better then the cliche "now you need to be punished young lady" ending that I thought was coming.
Well done!
Hornyhusband2017about 4 years agoI enjoyed this short story a lot. Definitely left an opening for more chapters. Maybe add some naughty fun for the mom.
JBEdwardsabout 4 years agoNow that's a Mom you've gotta love! I don't know how you packed so much delight into such a short narrative, but you did. Loved the story. I'd give you five stars, if I could. -- JB
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