All Comments on 'Good Morning'

by elizaloo

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MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 2 months ago

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Jeb56Jeb56about 2 months ago

And a very good morning to you…!

Jeb56Jeb56about 2 months ago

A wonderful way to wake up!

chthonicjourneyschthonicjourneysabout 2 months ago

That fluid and drifting and liminal space between sleep and wake can be so enchanting and drenchingly erotic. You capture it in such an intimate and visceral way. Every breath, every drawn out word feels like it's bodily emerging from the very core of your being. Sound itself is so different from the printed word literally the vibrations of the body of the speaker penetrating the into the body of the hearer. You use the penetrative quality of sound in such a writhingly hot way. Nicely done.

bestkeptsecret678bestkeptsecret678about 1 month ago

I don't know what I love most... your erotic moments along the way... or the charming giggle a the end followed by a cheerful "good morning!" As indicated by the other comment, the sublime barrier between sleep and awake is something special. It will have new implications for me going forward.

Well done ElizaLoo!!

MythicArjunaMythicArjuna26 days ago

.... "and I said Gaaaaaaahhhhhddddd Daaayyyyyuuummm". - Dave Chappelle (after hearing this clip). 🤣🤣

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I started writing and submitting to Lit in 2006... there have been a few dry years! Happy to be back at writing and submitting stories, poems, along with some audios. NoTalentHack wrote an amazing (as always) short piece that was submitted to Letters, and very kindly aske...